நான் சுமக்த துணிந்தது
என் இழப்பு ஒன்றைத்தான்
ஐயோ!
இருக்கும் இடமெல்லாமும்
அது எடுத்துக்கொண்டதே!
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N
Saturday, August 11, 2007
நான் சுமக்த துணிந்தது
என் இழப்பு ஒன்றைத்தான்
ஐயோ!
இருக்கும் இடமெல்லாமும்
அது எடுத்துக்கொண்டதே!
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7 comments:
your stuff never ceases to amaze me! Simple and beautiful! Have you thought about spoken word anytime? I badly want to do spoken word with your stuff! If you ever decide to do spoken word, I want to be a part of it! :)
do you use gmail often? my id is prasanna.phys
@ PV: :) Ty! :) What is spoken word?? kettadhu illa, u could tell me. n well added on gtalk :)
couldn't resist writing these lines...
'naan aasai patadhu vellai niram ondrai thaan.
aiyaho!
enn thalai ellam
epothu vellai aanthatey!'
with that my long cherished wish of writing a verse comes true...lol
just to add some background info...
lines inspired by the snow white syndrome a.k.a 'greying'
and simple lines...very reflective though!
Nive,
this is good but i beleive u hav the ability to go further beyond these words/thoughts and get some scintillating one :)
@ Murali:
Lol! got that one myself :)
@ Sathia:
Ty! :) I hope to..
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