குறை கொண்ட கோதையின்கொஞ்சும் குறள் கேட்டது.
கண்ணீரின் காரணமாய்
கண்ணிரண்டும் கலங்கியது.
கல்லறை கதவுகள்
கண்ணாடி கல்வெட்டாகிட
கணா கண்டவளை கைபிடித்திழுத்தது.
கணவில் கலவாட
கதை கூட காணுமடி;
காற்றும் கைத்தட்டும்
கருத்தை காபாற்றடி.
கற்கண்டும் கசக்குமடி
கற்பூரம் கருகுமடி
கல் நெஞ்சுக்கனவனுடன், அது
காலம் கொண்ட காதலடி.
27 comments:
absolutely brilliant!! will post a reply soon:)
thank u :)and let the reply flow ;)
ka'vil kavithaiai kavithuvamaaga kathaiththa kavithaiyea, kavithaiyinnaalam kanmunnea kaatchiyaakirathadi....
Gud poem and gud feeling... :) Gud writing... keep it up buddy!!!... :-)
Cheers,
L.Kitts
some dint get the ka fund!!! u did! :) thank u
lemme admit...honestly i'd never be able to write as well as some of you guys do....i'm stumped! how on earth do you churn out such verses....
two lines were a standout....
'kannadi kalvettaagida' and
'kaatrum kaithattum'
forgive me....some times i'm better off trying to fix bugs, than creating or may be even interpreting poetry....good job lady!
Total 35K’s and all words starting with "K"…great piece of work …vairamuthu patharuna avaroda adutha kavithai edition la copy panna poraru..just kidding :)….again, I cudn’t enjoy fully due to english interference…again re-iterating, when there are lot of technical feasiblities available, why there is still a difficulty in converting to tamil ?
@ murali
Thank you so much. That was a very generous compliment. :)
@ Sathia
I was working on converting the whole thing to tamizh. stuck halfway though. But there are some readers here, who can appreciate tamizh but not read it. ;) well that makes me re think about conerting the whole blog. :-S
cudn't understand "But there are some readers here, who can appreciate tamizh but not read it" ...appreciating without knowing/understanding or even experiencing what u meant to say in ur kavithai ?!...STRANGE !!!
haha, i know it needs some explanation. these are people who cannot read tamizh, as in ezhuthu kooti padika theriyaadhu. but to a large extent, they are able to understand. :)
gud dudette, go ahead:)...as far as u go by that corner, people like me won't experience much(fully) of ur words :-(
:( , anyway its half way thru. i ll convert these someday soon :)
gud gud :)...
this is presumedsane btw, from my other id.. :)
@ gary
i guessed as much! :)
stunning...absolutely stunning...keep the ink flowing
btw, landed on ur blog while orkut-hopping...look forward to ur next post
ur photography is even brilliant...
@ improper bostonian?
thank u! :) your profile gives no detail, nor does ur blog. but thanks :) do visit again.
have to fill in detail...few posts are actually in the pipeline...i shud find time to post them soon...
honestly, our blog themes are/will be similar, it wont be as classy as urs, not even in my wildest dreams...
it was very pleasant to read some original poetry, with a coffee, this morning...some info abt me could be found in my orkut profile under "karthik chandra"
@ Improper bostonian
:) very very kind words there. Thanks again. do blog, lemme know when its up :) tc!
:-)...sure...will do...tc
Hi this is Andrew, Really Very nice....! I am wondering about the gift of writing... Nivedhitha, Please keep writing kavithai in tamil, really god has given you very good gift. Nice kavithai! while reading ur kavithai, I felt that real feelings! Amazing!
Keep posting various kavaithaigal!
Plz, inform me about ur every new kavithai....!
my mail id andrew.chellam@gmail.com
Cheers,
Andrew...
Nivedhitha, just to let u know...my blog is up now...one random post is up for now...will add posts soon, maybe this weekend
sure will take a look.
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